Comic 106 - Chapter 3 Page 40

15th Aug 2016, 5:55 PM in A Matter of Balance
Chapter 3 Page 40
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midnightclubx 15th Aug 2016, 5:55 PM edit delete
We've finally reached the end of chapter 3!

As a reminder, we will be starting Chapter 4 with a slightly different schedule; we will have one week where we will make a page for chapter 4, and then on the next, we will make a page for the remake of chapter 1. We will be going back and forth on it until we finish chapter 1, and then we should be back to normal.

We're also still trying to get the new schedule for Patreon to work as well; I'm hoping it's not gonna take too long, but in case it doesn't, I'll see what I can do to make sure we make it stick. ;)

As long as Lydia doesn't do anything too suspicious in the next chapter, I'm sure Ramirovan won't be up in the trio's grills. :P

Art (C) AtariBetch
The Rest (C) Someone who thinks PXS agents have the best VR/AR headsets ever.


Zanreo 15th Aug 2016, 5:59 PM edit delete reply
Those headsets x3 nice
midnightclubx 15th Aug 2016, 6:11 PM edit delete reply
Probably more enhanced than even the HTC Vive. :P
zz2000 16th Aug 2016, 4:49 PM edit delete reply
First time commenting here.

Stumbled across your webcomic by accident whilst surfing the web a few weeks ago, and just caught up with the latest chapter. Really eager to see which direction you plan to take this series too, so wish you all the best in your storytelling and publishing efforts!!

In regards to the redrawing of Chp 1, may I provide some suggestions for further improving it? For example, redesigning Lydia's house in Chp 1 would be an opportunity for you and Ataribech to visually hint to readers what sort of life and family background her character has. Like say if you redrew her house as an imposing 2 storey colonial style mansion to fit the spooky look from Chp 1, that could be used to hint that her family could be quite well-off financially (and could also allow you to set what type of people her parents are like should you choose to go there). Perhaps something like below:

Also, casual clothing styles can be used to further define your characters' personalities visually, but don't hesitate to give each of your mains their own distinctive style. Like how Lydia's general clothing style tells me she's more of a tomboy (if that's what you were aiming for). Likewise, try see if you can extend the styling to the male characters as well (ex. Simon dresses in nerd chic, which would reflect his goofy dorkiness further etc.) Google's your best friend when it comes to fashion styles!

Good luck!!

zz2000 16th Aug 2016, 5:58 PM edit delete reply
Accidentally posted twice, my apologies!
midnightclubx 17th Aug 2016, 3:46 AM edit delete reply
No worries; I always delete dupe comments. : P

Anyway, we're definitely gonna consider what needs to be changed and the like, especially the first scene of the chapter. :P

We just have to wait and see.
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