Comic 108 - Chapter 4 Page 1

25th Aug 2016, 8:48 PM in Crash Course
Chapter 4 Page 1
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midnightclubx 25th Aug 2016, 8:48 PM edit delete
It feels really good to be uploading this at my normal time again; I wasn't a fan of uploading this on Friday proper, or on Saturday, or Monday. I finally got to upload it at midnight (eastern time)! Schedule's gonna get a tad messed up when I go on vacation in a couple weeks, but whatever; Let's just bask in the normalness for now. XD

Also, I'm a tad in over my head with rewriting the first scene for chapter 1; I'm having to change bits and pieces to make it a bit more modern (i.e. Sam and Simon are now writing their acceptance letters and/or application with laptops instead of writing it with a pen and paper), but at least I'm not having to rewrite the entire chapter a 4th time, because SCREW THAT NOISE!

Anyway, have another sampling of Sam's metaphors that segue into the chapter; not sure if there's gonna be anymore in future chapters, since we now have enough stuff established to actually get stuff moving, but it really is gonna depend on my mood when I write chapter 5 and beyond. (And before anyone asks, I didn't bother writing more than 3 full chapters because it was around the time I was not wanting to write anymore unless I actually got an artist working with me, and then we had 3 separate occasions where the artist(s) bailed on me for different reasons. Fun stuff.

I'm like the Oakland Raiders, where I too have a Commitment to Excellenceâ„¢, and wanna make sure everything is in line rather than write for something that doesn't have certainty it will happen.

But I'm not sure I'd wanna move to Las Vegas. Sorry, Barrin84 . ;)

Art (C) ataribetch
The Rest (C) Someone who's wanting to get that stupid remake scene over with already.
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Comments:

Cyrus The Fox 25th Aug 2016, 8:55 PM edit delete reply
Ah yes, Barrin84. Great artist.
midnightclubx 25th Aug 2016, 9:12 PM edit delete reply
I talk to him whenever he streams; he's pretty funny. :P
HiFranc 25th Aug 2016, 9:56 PM edit delete reply
HiFranc
What's the punchline?
midnightclubx 26th Aug 2016, 3:07 AM edit delete reply
Not really an actual punchline, other than a nod to Troll 2. :P
Guest 26th Aug 2016, 10:22 AM edit delete reply
On the plus side, remaking Chp 1's a golden opportunity for you to not only modernise the settings, but to polish up or fix any part of Chp 1's scenario you think is lacking, too draggy, or didn't flow or fit well in the original. For example, there are Japanese light novel authors whose books are a big rewrite of their original webnovels, and readers have said the rewrites are much better.

PS. I've always wondered if the Stranger Danger part felt a bit forced and skeevy. Perhaps a rewrite like Lydia drops something of hers (keychain?), Simon sees it and uses it as an excuse to "visit" Lydia's house, along that line.
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