Comic 141 - Chapter 1 Remake Page 15

15th Sep 2017, 9:01 PM in Early Bird Special REMAKE
Chapter 1 Remake Page 15
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Author Notes:

midnightclubx 15th Sep 2017, 9:01 PM edit delete
Sorry about the lateness of this update; I was waiting for the next page to be finished so I can give that to Patreon before I upload this one to the public. D:

Sam, I wouldn't really judge her just yet. ;I

Art (C) KarolyneRocha
The Rest (C) Someone who got distracted way too many times today (Why the hell was I watching Korean news, a second ago?!)


Dr.Cynic 16th Sep 2017, 4:25 AM edit delete reply
So, this page always had me confused. Why would she give him her number while asking for his number first?
Dr. Cynic 16th Sep 2017, 4:27 AM edit delete reply
Ah, my bad, she said nevermind in the original, but not in this one.
xwindows 16th Sep 2017, 10:12 AM edit delete reply
I'm confused about her action too.

The original version of this scene makes sense because she said "N-nevermind, I'll just give you my number" in hurry. This version however, she said "Sure, but give me your number first" then simply continue on and wrote her number anyway, which is self-contradicting.

I believe this could be worked around by changing third panel dialog to something along the line of "Nevermind, I know you're not a stalker, but we barely met yesterday, you know?"
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