Comic 56 - Chapter 2 Page 18

3rd Oct 2015, 10:53 PM in The First Shift
Chapter 2 Page 18
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)
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Author Notes:

midnightclubx 3rd Oct 2015, 10:53 PM edit delete
Sorry for being late with uploading the page tonight; I was out and about all day at the Museum of Pinball, playing a bunch of pinball and arcade games while saying hi to Tommy Tallarico for the first time since 2007 (I have an old pic of myself and him somewhere on my DA gallery); if by some chance he's reading this, let me say I hope you've been enjoying the comic so far!

Anyway, this is the last page that will be uploaded once a week! (Hopefully) next week, Patreon will give me the funds and we can start uploading twice a week up in this hizouse! (I'm tired, okay?! XDD) But yeah, that, and rewards will start being dispatched once that happens!

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Art (C) AtariBetch
The Rest (C) Someone who posed for the camera on the arcade triathlon they had at the Museum. I don't think the stream will see it, but when in Rome. XD


HotStuff 4th Oct 2015, 1:12 AM edit delete reply
What does F.M.L mean?
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 1:55 AM edit delete reply
Futuristic Mexican Llamas. ;)

(I can't exactly tell you what FML is since this is a PG-13 comic, but I'm sure you can easily google it. XP )
HotStuff 4th Oct 2015, 2:14 AM edit delete reply
Fair enough
laterz 6th Oct 2015, 3:48 PM edit delete reply
its "Fix my lighthouse", its kinda obvious that she really likes lighthouses
The Letter M 4th Oct 2015, 2:19 AM edit delete reply
The Letter M
I love her classic sci-fi posters
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 8:46 PM edit delete reply
Same. I'd like to think she has a collection of those posters hanging in her closet. XP
MadJak91 4th Oct 2015, 7:10 AM edit delete reply
Hungry as a wolf. Heh.
So I guess her appetite increases.
Does that also apply to her human form? I think she said it does (munching hamburgers) but still.
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 8:47 PM edit delete reply
Like I've mentioned to some people, I've always imagined that transforming would burn a ton of calories, so people would naturally have a good amount of hunger afterwards. XP
Random 4th Oct 2015, 9:10 AM edit delete reply
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 8:48 PM edit delete reply
v v
Shrkb8t 4th Oct 2015, 10:05 AM edit delete reply
I'm going to continue to believe that F.M.L does actually mean 'Futuristic Mexican Llamas'.

Awesome werewolf, awesome posters, awesome page!
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 8:50 PM edit delete reply
And also "Funny Magical Leprechauns" and "Friendly Mafia Lawyers" over on DA. ;)

GoodMudkip 25th Jan 2019, 9:56 PM edit delete reply
Full Moon Lycanthropes?
Diomedes 4th Oct 2015, 3:51 PM edit delete reply
"This can't get any worse"...You asked for it, Lydia! >< Her design is by far an improvement over the previous art style, first panel is the best one of her furry variant so far. Great work from the both of you, as always, looking forward to the next update.
midnightclubx 4th Oct 2015, 8:51 PM edit delete reply
I agree; tbh, I thought the first version of her werewolf form looked more like a furry than this design, personally. XP
Diomedes 5th Oct 2015, 6:30 AM edit delete reply
Funnily enough, I really liked the work Bonegnaws started the comic out with and the initial design he did for Lydia and her wolf form, it really set the comic apart from previous ones I'd read by being a little more slice-or-life in style, but I get that wasn't the style you originally had in mind. However, personally, I found the work done by Redsheis to be a bit of a downgrade, the style was just a bit too 'choppy' and abstract for my liking, and Lydia's wolf design did not leave a good taste in my mouth at all, I ended up preferring Bonegnaws design just because it at least made Lydia look more like a wolf than a ferret XD But Atari really get's the look down pretty well, the only change I could think of making is maybe making her hands a little more paw-like, but that's just me.
midnightclubx 5th Oct 2015, 1:40 PM edit delete reply
I'm actually surprised you know Bonegnaws' penname (Mehzness) for the comic when we first started the comic. XP
(I'm assuming you're referring to the first 3-4 pages that's in the scraps on my FA, before I restarted the comic with Horace-Bulregard, who's a different person).

When I first wrote the script, I had Bonegnaws' art style in mind, but after those 4 pages, she couldn't work with me anymore, and not long afterwards, I hired Horace.

Redsheis' art style was better (and even though she didn't stick around, at least she finished the chapter. ^^; ); the only downside was the werewolf design, which looked a bit off to me, but she told me she didn't want to make her look like a furry.

Also, I'm sure Atari looks here every once in a while, so I'm sure he's looking at the feedback. :D

Random 5th Oct 2015, 3:22 PM edit delete reply
F.M.L. Appropriate, lol wonder how ud explain that.^~^
midnightclubx 5th Oct 2015, 7:44 PM edit delete reply
Next to impossible in a PG-13 comic, so you gotta improvise. XP
abby1st 5th Oct 2015, 6:22 PM edit delete reply
Hold up a minute! If Lydia can control herself in her werewolf form, then what about that guy who "infected" her? Is he going to be an important character? Why did he attack her? Was he able to control himself, too?
midnightclubx 5th Oct 2015, 7:46 PM edit delete reply

Let's just say that there's a reason for everything, and that there's more to some things than what you're seeing right now. ;)
abby1st 5th Oct 2015, 6:27 PM edit delete reply
Also I've found that an artist like Atari B. can compose a colored and detailed page in a day if familiar with the work (though I highly don't suggest it unless you like drawing THAT much, real stressful.) This is really just a fantasy but would it be possible if u guys started getting payed a lot for you to post 5 pages a week? I figure you'd get very far in the story that way pretty quickly but this really is only out of curiosity.
midnightclubx 5th Oct 2015, 7:50 PM edit delete reply
Yeah, he's a hard worker to say the least.

And I'm not sure if either of us could handle 5 pages a week. (Atari's hands would just turn into graham crackers while writing the script with a very fast deadline would turn my brain into a fried egg! XD) Maybe if we got paid $600-$1,000 a month, it could happen, but a ton of people would have to donate for that to even remotely happen.
abby1st 5th Oct 2015, 8:54 PM edit delete reply
lol!I learned my lesson last year in a project. I was in a slump for months after.
Random 6th Oct 2015, 1:27 AM edit delete reply
I mean if u were Lydia right now ...... How would u explain that to ur parents, that I'm assuming by the last panel is suggesting are driving in.
Random 6th Oct 2015, 1:37 AM edit delete reply
Ps FML I'm clear on ^_^

(Fancy Musical Lemons) :P
Guest 16th Apr 2019, 10:54 PM edit delete reply
It's is F my life
Wildestorm 16th Apr 2019, 10:56 PM edit delete reply
Sorry thisnis.wildestorm
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