Comic 57 - Chapter 2 Page 19

10th Oct 2015, 2:13 AM in The First Shift
Chapter 2 Page 19
Average Rating: 4.67 (3 votes)
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midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 2:13 AM edit delete
I gotta make this quick since I need to go to bed not long after I upload this page; This is pretty exciting, getting to make the extra pages and stuff; the only bummer is I'm gonna have to work twice as hard on the script so I'm not having to go into crunch time or whatever. XP

Anyway, I wonder what kind of werewolfery Lydia is going to be doing tonight? ;D

Art (C) AtariBetch
The Rest (C) Someone who is highly suggesting you play UnderTale as soon as possible. 8I
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MadJak91 10th Oct 2015, 5:28 AM edit delete reply
MadJak91
You never know.
Maybe her dad is a HUGE Wolfman fan and would love to get turned into one as well!
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Guess not.
midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 8:51 PM edit delete reply
If that were the case, he would probably have mixed signals. XD
Shrkb8t 10th Oct 2015, 6:08 AM edit delete reply
Let's just hope Lydia's parents don't discover the remains of her clothing. Put two and two together with the full moon...nah that won't happen...
midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 8:52 PM edit delete reply
Heheh, that's why she scrambled to clean the room up a bit in the middle panel there. XP
Shrkb8t 11th Oct 2015, 12:11 PM edit delete reply
You've checkmated me. Well played. :D
Diomedes 10th Oct 2015, 6:31 AM edit delete reply
Diomedes
As always, excellent page to go with the rest. I'm really loving how Lydia's design is starting to come together, her whole look has really developed since her original concept by Atari. However the only criticism I have to make is the final panel, in which Lydia is starting to look a little like a wendigo from Until Dawn. Her forearm is sorta freakishly long, I get as a werewolf she's meant to have longer arms, but Atari might want to consider shaving off a couple inches. Her hand also looks a little unbalanced, once again getting a very Until Dawn feeling from it. Lastly her leg, while fine in most ways, does look like it's being bent at a very uncomfortable angle. Anyway, in the end I'm whinging about stuff I could never hope to do half as well myself, so feel free to take this as lightly as you want, and for the most part this page is holding up to the great standards set by the rest of the comic. Looking forward to the next page.
midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 8:57 PM edit delete reply
Glad you like it, and I told Atari about the feedback regarding the arms. :) Thanks!
Random 10th Oct 2015, 2:42 PM edit delete reply
^_^
midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 8:56 PM edit delete reply
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HotStuff 10th Oct 2015, 5:50 PM edit delete reply
It weird how her parents arrive just as her transformation ends
Plus is it just me or is her arm a little too long?
midnightclubx 10th Oct 2015, 8:57 PM edit delete reply
I guess a case of bad luck turned worse, eh? XP

And I mentioned the long arms to Atari; we appreciate the feedback!
HotStuff 11th Oct 2015, 5:19 AM edit delete reply
All good
I'm glad that the pages will be coming out quicker too
Can't wait
Random 12th Oct 2015, 10:18 AM edit delete reply
I think bad luck turned worse is a bit of an understatement XD
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